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(1)
For years the Inuit people passed down their storys.
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One story I read is called "Raven and the geese."
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Raven was lonely and he wanted a wife.
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One day he seen eight fine geese fly toward the North Pole.
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Raven called, "let me marry your daughter and come with you."
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The leader said, "Raven, your too weak for this trip."
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Why did Raven fly with the geese on Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday.
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Well, he was conceited, and he thinked he was very, very strong.
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On Thursday, Raven shrieked, "I cant fly anywhere else!"
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He stopped for relief, and the geese flied on without him.
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